Story Arcs – What are they?

Story Arcs – What are they?

A story arc is an extended storyline used to effect change in character, group of characters, or a situation in a piece of writing. Although they are more usually used in television, or other forms of serialisation, they can also be used with good effect in a longer piece of work, such as a novel.

The Eight Point Arc

Writing a Novel and Getting Published (Teach Yourself: writer's library)

An example of a very common form of story arc is “The Eight Point Arc”.  I first came across this type of arc in “Writing a Novel” by Nigel Watts (Hodder & Stoughton).

The book is currently out of print, but some Amazon sellers do hold old or second hand copies (I got mine for £0.01p plus postage).

This article is dedicated to Mr Watts’ inspiration.

(And additionally to Luke and friends for serving to illustrate the framework so well!)

1. Stasis

This is the normal day-to-day reality of the story.  Think of Luke Skywalker working on the farm and fixing droids.   Luke dreams of becoming something bigger in his life.

2. Trigger

This is an unusual event that is beyond the control of your hero or heroine.  A trigger does not have to be a large event.  It can quite easily be a droid with an unusual recording in its memory banks…

3. The Quest

The quest may change or stay the same throughout the story arc.   In Luke’s case he wants to know who the woman is in the recording, then it becomes a quest for love and then a battle against the empire and then…well, you know the rest.

4. Surprise

For a story to remain interesting, there must be some kind of conflict or obstacle for the protagonist to overcome.  In this part of the story arc we are looking for such an event, but it must remain believable and is better if it is unexpected.

The surprise needs to change the day-to-day reality (stasis) for the chief character in your story and propel them forward, else they could just ignore the event and go back to “normality”.  For example, when Ben Kenobi asks Luke to travel to Alderan, he initially refuses.

In Luke’s case the surprise event in his story arc would be when the empire destroys the farm and kills his parents.  This surprise is of sufficient magnitude to propel the character forward: it irrevocably changes the status quo, is not easily predicted and also sets the tone for the “character” of the Empire.

5. Critical Choice

Star Wars Trilogy

This is an apparently insurmountable problem for the protagonist.  This is the “What am I going to do now?” part of the story arc.  The decision generated should be a critical choice and not a trivial one, as it is a great opportunity for your lead character to show their deeper nature.

In Luke’s case, he elects to leave Tatooine to pursue the battle against the Empire and find Princess Leia.  A lesser character might have decided that the Empire was too powerful and that there was little chance of finding one person in the vastness of space.

This choice is an indication of the determination and heroic qualities of Luke.

6. Climax

The obstacles placed in the way of a protagonist are there to test your character.  These tests should effect a definite change.

The climax in Star Wars IV could be considered to be when Luke finds Princess Leia and rescues her from the Death Star, but of course there is more to come.  Luke is now part of the Rebellion and takes part in the attack to destroy the Death Star.

7. Reversal

Even with the Rebel Forces in possession of the plans to the Death Star, it is still a formidable target.  This continued threat helps to add tension, but it is likely it will be destroyed as the pilots are well trained for the mission.

Of course, the carefully laid plans suffer a reversal when Darth Vader and his wingmen spoil the Rebels’ attack.  As the Rebel forces are slowly being destroyed, all looks lost…

8. Resolution

…until Luke takes his fighter to the exhaust port and successfully hits the target, thus destroying the Death Star and establishing himself as a hero of the Rebellion.  This fulfils his initial drive to be “something bigger” and could easily lead to a new “stasis”.  Of course, for Luke, his story is only just beginning.

Arcs within Arcs

Star Wars Episode IV - A New Hope (1977 & 2004 Versions, 2-Disc Widescreen Edition)

Luke’s story arc is but one among many in “A New Hope”.   A rich plot will have many such story arcs, affecting many characters.  However, the main arc should always centre on the main protagonist and that arc should be a means to demonstrate how they have changed as a character.

Sometimes a return to stasis is the deliberate aim of a story arc and changes in the character are only of a very minor nature.  It is this kind of return to stasis that television writers often use.

In this type of story arc, the chief character explores many different events but often effectively remains unchanged.  If not done exceptionally well, this lack of change and character growth can leave an audience unsatisfied and is in most cases probably best avoided.

Using Story Arcs

The “Eight Point Story Arc” detailed here is not a plotting panacea.  Writing a long piece of work, such as a novel, is a complex process.  Trying to plan a book from this material alone may leave the plot feeling too directed or stilted.

A better use for it may be in analysis of an existing story, or a work in progress.  If the story is lacking direction then trying to identify the various part of the story arc might well shed light on what is missing and help you on your way again.

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Review: Plot and Structure, James Scott Bell

Review: Plot and Structure, James Scott Bell

Do you find that when you start a piece of writing you are sure of your plot and structure of your story? Do you find that after a only a few chapters (or paragraphs!) you are writing another story altogether? If any of this sounds familiar, this article is for you.

When I first started to become a writer a problem I ran into was that the first three sections in a piece were just great, but over time the story started to wander. This issue would tend to magnify in relation to the length of the piece of work.  I needed advice from a professional writer, or instructor, but I didn’t know any.

The problem, at least in part, was that although I thought I knew what I was setting out to write my actual conception of the overall plot was weak. I knew the end I wanted and many of the plot points along the way, but as soon as the story started my writing seem to go on to wander a path all of its own.

In short, I needed a system.

Plot and Structure

Plot & Structure: (Techniques And Exercises For Crafting A Plot That Grips Readers From Start To Finish) (Write Great Fiction)

Well, one of the first books I bought in this area was “Plot and Structure” by James Scott Bell.

It is no exaggeration to say that when I read this book I thought I had discovered the “Holy Grail” of writing books (yes, I was a newbie). Plot and Structure suddenly illuminated areas of the writing process I had never even considered.

For instance, are you a NOP or an OP kind or person? It is ok to be confused by those words, they are terms from the book. An OP is an “outline person” and a NOP is a “no outline person”. Mr Bell shows how plotting can still be relevant even if you are a NOP kind of person.

Plot and Structure deals with the usual beginnings, middles and ends of a story but it goes a lot further. The book also deals with techniques for tightening tension and increasing interest, developing characters through plot events, motifs, themes, dialogue and also suggestions on how to generate new plot ideas.

An interesting technique that Mr Bell illustrates for developing plot is the “LOCK” system. This stands for Lead, Objective, Confrontation and Knockout. This acronym is well developed in the book and makes for a very useful addition to the aspiring writers’ toolkit.

Plot and structure gives a brief tour of everything you might need to gain a basic knowledge of writing a longer piece of work. Obviously within 230 pages or so these topics cannot be dealt with in great depth, but this takes nothing away from the book.

It is a great book and one that I learned a great deal from. I can recommend it without reservation for anyone that is having trouble with plot and structure.

Dave Felton.

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Copyright, Plagiarism and Acknowledgement of Authorship

When you post material on a free content website you do so knowing that others will publish your work for no fee.  This is, of course, fine and as it should be.  The question is when they do so by breaking the original terms and post the work as their own should you take offence, legal action or what?

Please compare:  http://literatureonsite.blogspot.com/2010/02/is-science-fiction-writing-necessarily.html

With my original:  http://ezinearticles.com/?Is-Science-Fiction-Writing-Necessarily-Not-Serious-Literature?&id=3753554

(Yes, I have taken screenshots in case the “author” decides to “edit” his “work” at a later date.)

The differences between the two articles at time of posting are very few.  The owner of the website appears to think that by altering a few words here and there it will become an original article.  Maybe he also thought that by performing such small alterations the plagiarism would escape detection.

The site that has posted this appears to be merely a “scraper” type site for the purposes of hosting Google Adsense adverts.  I say this because the site seems to have little original content, but merely endless cut and pasted articles taken from elsewhere.  This would appear to be an Adsense violation also.

When I discovered the site earlier today I admit I was annoyed.  If the author would actually acknowledge where the article came from (backlink) I couldn’t care less where it is listed, providing he would also list it unaltered.  Indeed the link to the original author and publishing the work unaltered is the agreement under which the site he downloaded it from operates.

The guy who listed this clearly cannot speak English.  It is because of the atrocities committed by Google translate that I finally had to laugh.

Take this as an example:

‘When science-fiction writing effective form of this connection with the reader, then, how can it as “poor literature will be judged”?’

Sorry, what did you say?

I assume because of the apparent inability to speak English that he is poor and is performing his acts of piracy to earn some money.  I don’t begrudge his efforts to make money from writing, as since my hospitalisation, I am unable to work at present and in a similar situation.  What annoys me is the lack of acknowledgement of the original source and the mutilation of my work in order to try and escape plagiarism filters.

The article was already listed for free.  What more did he want?

Dave Felton.

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